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About Me Member Pixel Artist Yagami-San15/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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My Story

Thu Mar 15, 2007, 8:41 AM
  • Mood: Stuck
I drew a picture of two boys in one of my classes. One looks like a racer and one is little and holding a wrench in his hand. I didn't think it would go anywhere after I drew it. But some of my friends that really liked it and gave me really good ideas as to where I should take that picture. So added a story behind it.
The boy on the left is a racer and the one on the right (the small one) is a car repairer. The dad (who I am am in the progress of creating) is abusive to the older son when he loses a race, which the father bets money on. The younger one is exposed to this abusiveness which brings them colser together. One day a buisnessman bets against the father for $3,000 and the father accepts. To make sure the racer boy loses, the buisnessman messes with the boys car. during the race, A car almost identical to the boys car spins out, crashes, and the driver is badly injured. The buisnessman messed with the wrong car, and the boy wins the race. The father asks the buisnessman for the money, but then is shot on killed by the buisnessman who didn't have it.

My questions are, to anybody who wants to respond:
What should I title it?
What should the characters names be? (Ill post the picture later)
Where should I go with the story?

I'm thinking of the boys going off to avenge their father, but I don;t know in what way. Where will they stay? Where will they go?

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:iconfinalzidane-x:
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hello this is a chain letter and im a fairy
u will have to send this to 30 different people
today there will be a phone call, but no one would answer
the next day will be another phone call at the stroke of midnight and there would be no answer
on the third day if u dont bake me a thousand cookies
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i will fall in love wit u
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and if u bake me the god damn cookies.......










































































I'LL FUCKING KILL U MAN AND SLIT UR GOD DAMN FUCKING THROAT!!!! U SHOULDNT DO WAT A STUPID ASS CHAIN LETTER SAYS ANYWAYS!!!! U STUPID BITCH!!!!! but i'll keep the cookies......
































































♥ bye bye ♥
from ur cute little fairy from across the lane....




















































































hee hee ♥

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>:3

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OMG IT'S MYLES!!!!!!!! :hug: :glomp: :heart:

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You spelled my name wrong. (Myles)

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